2.6

Patches of turquoise
pierce the silver morning sky
before the rains come.

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2 Responses to “2.6”

  1. Here, in the evening,
    Ominously purple skies
    heralded the rain.

  2. I like it.

    Except the last word. I’m not being prudish, it’s just… it closes the phrase a little awkward.

    ‘before the big rain’?

    ‘before the black rain’?

    ”and then comes the rain”

    srry. i just really want it to end with rain.

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